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April 2003

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April 30, 2003
Dated tomorrow, because it’s already tomorrow today in New Zealand, is an article in the New Zealand Herald about the backlash a popular children’s hospital encountered when it tried to disassociate itself from its branding:
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Yes, the hospital management had no concept of branding. Or, rather, they did have a concept of branding, but it was the one popularized by self-proclaimed one-minute branding experts: that a brand is a stylized means of increasing sales and market share. In fact, what we call a brand is nothing more - or less - than a reputation and the emotional connection people have with that reputation. Like a good reputation, a good brand takes a long time to build. Like a good reputation, a good brand is built by people not advertising, by consumers not marketers. And, like a good reputation, a good brand should never be tossed aside lightly.
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April 29, 2003
A new book, called The Hidden Power of Advertising, by Robert Heath, explores new research behind what the author has branded “low involvement processing.” In short, branding messages work in far more subtle ways than most people think:
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It’s another example of advertising research finally catching up to what advertising copywriters and art directors have known since the dawn of advertising itself: that certain messages operate on levels that cannot be adequately tested in a focus group. Advertising only works - or fails - in real life.
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April 25, 2003
What is deceptive advertising? Well, here are several clear-cut examples by one automotive dealership, from the California Department of Motor Vehicles, courtesy Business Wire:
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Not much to add to it, other than that I hate to see clichés about car dealers and advertising proven true.
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April 24, 2003
Since we’re discussing possibly deceptive advertising practices, here’s a story about SUV advertising drawing written warnings from some 40 state attorney generals, from Just-Auto.com:
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I’d categorize this as SUV backlash because it comes so late. To the extent that any change in depictions of SUVs in advertising may protect consumers, that protection would have as its actual foundation the fact that car-based SUVs are capturing ever-increasing market share, largely because of improved handling and ride characteristics over truck-based SUVs. Consumer Reports taking on the Suzuki Samurai and Isuzu Trooper during the rise and peak of SUV popularity was honest and sincere. The action of the attorney generals (elected officials, by the way) this late in the game smacks of political showmanship, plain and simple. But then, that’s marketing too.
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April 23, 2003
Here’s a U.S. Supreme Court case, involving the First Amendment and Nike’s press releases, advertorials, and website copy, picked up from the Associated Press by Salon:
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Even though I’m an advertising copywriter, I do not think that advertising copy warrants the same level of Constitutional protection as other forms of speech or press. However, with globalization (and consequent dealing with other political and economic systems) comes issues beyond the actual product. With my latest purchase of New Balance shoes came a six-panel hang tag explaining what the company believed it meant when it labeled the shoes “Made in USA.” I do not believe that that hang tag should contain outright lies or unsupportable claims; at the same time, I am aware, by context, that what I am reading is written entirely from the perspective of New Balance Athletic Shoe, Inc. In the case of Nike Inc. vs Kasky, I believe that when accusations are leveled against a business, then that business must not be forced to leave those accusations unanswered simply because it is a business.
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April 21, 2003
The fast-food chain McDonald’s is testing two different ad approaches in an attempt to find one that will resonate with consumers. Here’s the article, from the Charleston (SC) Post and Courier:
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If the adoption of a shotgun approach to advertising doesn’t prove that these people are clueless, the line about the senior executives sitting through “hours of presentations” does. Take some advice from a little ol’ freelance advertising copywriter: advertising simply cannot take hours to understand.
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April 17, 2003
As long as we’re talking about target markets, here’s an article from my home-town paper, the San Diego Union-Tribune, about using computer-mapping technology to pinpoint specific potential customers:
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Information about the target market helps in advertising to the people within it, because it helps create relevant advertising messages. The more information you have, the more-relevant your advertising can be. But, the advertising still needs to capture attention. Relevance, in medium and message, is an aid to readership and conversion, but it is not the same thing. The low returns from the restaurant’s door-hanger ads might well have been caused by the ads themselves. Delivering a message that is relevant and on-target, but that fails to stand out in creative execution, is as much a waste of money as delivering to the wrong market.
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April 16, 2003
A story from The Advertiser (Australia) about targeting “tweenagers” - children between 8 and 14 years of age - with branding messages:
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As a parent, I feel appalled at the targeting of ever-younger groups of people (and let’s remember that they are people, not profit centers). As an advertising copywriter, I think we’re shooting ourselves - and our industry - in the foot by removing from the formative years a sense of innocence without which there can be no wonder. Without wonder, there can be no vitality in advertising - only re-formatted recitations of the brand dicta, executed with a dulled appeal to already cynical customers.
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April 15, 2003
This advertising blog gets re-built, with archives and a more traditional structure. And, the Puma Sneaker story that won’t go away gets analyzed (for the nth time) in MSN’s Slate:
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Conspiracy theories and conspiracy-within-conspiracy theories abound. Sigh. Is it viral marketing? Sub-viral marketing? Or, no marketing at all? I tend to favor the latter, since the results seem to be more buzz within the advertising industry than sales in the store.
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April 14, 2003
A couple weeks ago, I was talking about branding localities (Poland, Bulgaria, and Colorado). Here are two articles that illustrate some of the challenges faced by advertising agencies attempting to build a community brand identity. The first is from the Sacramento Bee, about a potential visual stunt that has evolved, through the sheer enthusiasm of marketing amateurs, into a badly misfired marketing concept. The second, from the Cincinnati Enquirer, points up the difficulties of funding and maintaining a branding campaign:
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With Sacramento’s potential tomato-painted water tower, the proposers (thankfully not an advertising agency) were going, one assumes, for whimsy. The idea falters because of the added-on conceptual weight the original, whimsical, idea has been forced to carry. Sometimes, a tomato should just be a tomato. And marketing amateurs should listen to   marketing professionals, who know when to stop.

One of the bigger re-branding stories today is WorldCom becoming MCI. Here are a couple links. The first is to an article in the Washington Business Journal, and the second is to a press release from WorldCom itself:
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I’m not convinced this is a smart move. Although MCI definitely has better brand characteristics right now than WorldCom, I think people have short memories. I’m also concerned that, by branding itself as MCI, the company will limit its opportunities and growth. And, short-term, I think WorldCom/MCI has better things to spend its money on right now, than a big-splash branding campaign; things like customer retention. I think re-branding as MCI helps fulfill a one-year plan, and maybe even a three-year plan. But probably not a ten-year plan or a 25-year plan, and that’s what branding is supposed to be about.
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April 11, 2003
Here’s a story of an advertising promotion that backfired. It’s dated tomorrow, but that’s because it’s already tomorrow in Thailand:
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In the U.S., it’s common for copywriters to envy the creative freedom copywriters enjoy in, say, most of Europe. Still, there’s creative freedom and there’s cultural sensitivity, and the two are not mutually exclusive. The first requirement for any copywriter is empathy, and I’m not certain how empathetic it is to the average Thai showerhead consumer to see a swimsuit-clad supermodel showering while being towed down a public street. Attention-getting, yes. Relevant, maybe - I haven’t seen the supporting advertising or marketing materials. But, empathy-wise, this one lands firmly in the “p.r. stunt” category.
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April 10, 2003
Lying, cheating, and stealing in advertising ... no, wait, it’s not what you think. Here’s the story, about a U.S.-based advertising agency, by the way, reported in the U.K.-based Guardian:
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On the one hand, and contrary to the article writer’s claim, advertising old-timers will say that there is nothing new here. Media and production always were two areas ripe for kick-backs and other personally enriching deals if the people in charge were unscrupulous enough to take them. On the other hand, the fact that this is now viewed as corporate malfeasance, instead of a corporate perk, is something new. And good.
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April 9, 2003
Um ... unique media opportunities, examined (thankfully briefly) in this article from the BBC:
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At the root of it is the classic idea that an innovative promotion can be an effective form of advertising, because it breaks through the noise, gets press coverage, and engages the audience on a personal level. I think the key question is this: is the promotion relevant to the product or service benefits? If it is, then that’s good; if it’s not, then it’s just another example of undisciplined “creative” (quotes intentional) minds at work, and will be every bit as wasteful of the marketing budget as a silly ad. It’s worth noting that Bill Bernbach once said “the heart of creativity is discipline.”
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April 8, 2003
An article summarizing some recent research into online branding and packaged goods consumers, from Daily Research News Online:
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The differences between “Brand Bonders” and “Brand Loyalists” is worth knowing. According to the research (Jupiter Media), Brand Bonders make up 25% of the U.S. online population, and believe the brands they use “reflect their personality.” They are busy, young, Internet-savvy, and more-likely to be female. The article suggests online bill payment as one way to reach this group.

Brand Loyalists, on the other hand, are older and mostly male. They make up 21% of the U.S. online population, are the most-affluent segment, and tend to be unwilling to try new brands. Examples given of ways to reach this group online include sports, stocks and bonds, and adult-oriented content.
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April 7, 2003
Branding Poland, an article from the Warsaw Business Journal:
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Poland used to be known, at least, for sausage, vodka, pickles, and crystal. Now, it is a nation that has lost its brand even as it expands its free market. As I look over the litany of government agencies and public institutions involved in Poland’s recent branding efforts, it’s clear to me why nothing has been accomplished despite massive expenditures of public funds. What I said a few days ago - well, it goes double here.
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April 3, 2003
Rebranding Bulgaria, an article from the Sofia Echo:
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A lot of classic advertising was done to promote nations. DDB’s work for Jamaica springs to mind, as well as Ogilvy & Mather’s work for Britain, France, and Puerto Rico. I wonder, though: with today’s reliance on politically charged committees and roving bands of consultants, can that level of creative brilliance be achieved again? Bulgaria’s two-year study just to develop a brand strategy does not bode well for breakthrough advertising.
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April 1, 2003
It’s no joke - advertising works. Here’s a link to an article in the Denver Post about Colorado state tourism advertising:
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They projected that every dollar spent on advertising would generate $2.75 in added revenue through state and local taxes. Instead, the $2.5 million ad campaign generated a whopping $32.4 million in added tax revenue, or an ROI of nearly $13 for every dollar invested in advertising and promotion.

But, there is an April Fool’s joke here, and it is that the advertising account is up for review! Yes, the incumbent ad agency, which created and implemented the ad campaign that generated these terrific results, now has to compete for the account all over again. That’s government work for you.
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